sadlittleman:

:B

aaa this is really keen! gosh you do such a great job with shading *__* that backlighting is incredible

i think the last panel would benefit if it had a kind of landmark to show what perspective it’s at—um, like in the first panel i can tell it’s a higher view point ‘cause of the guy. but in the last panel i can’t tell if it’s at eye level, or it’s looking over the edge, or if it’s the same pov as in the first

i know it’s supposed to be a wastelandy void, but maybe if you added more cracks to the ground in both panels it’d be more obvious

um

yeahhhh